Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: Acchi Kocchi EP03[by Vaklore][timed superjose][timing fixed Yukikaze].ass
Workraw: 03 AK (workraw).avi

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Sign at the beginning:
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#1
The snowy season is almost over isn't it?
*I'd go for a lit. translation, changed about into almost*

#4
Well then, as a closure for winter, why don't we play in the snow?
*you play in the snow. And it's a closure for something.*

#6 
Playing in the snow...
*see #4*

#10
That aside, it's quite cold outside, you know.
*teiuka construction, doesn't follow up the previous sentence*

#11
Don't worry! I'm a child of the wind!
*eng grammar fix*

#15
But I'm a child of mankind, so I do feel the cold.
*idem. Changed men to mankind*

#19
*The same reasoning works in English as well, no fix in TL needed here*

#25
That said,

#27
*It's strange why Io says this, I get the grasp of it but it's not possible literally translate it*
How did it come down to that... {or What's with that reasoning}

#30
Tsumiki-san, why don't we play in the snow together?
*repetitive error*

#31
I'll be going home, and curl up under the kotatsu.
*somewhat more TL precise*

#32
I wonder how to pull out a winter cat from the kotatsu...
*grammar fix*

#33
How about we bait for her?
#34
Bait...for her?
*Up to the editor*

#35
Tsu~mi~ki-san
*this reads better*

#36
If you don't play with us...
*removing yuki=snow because the watcher will know by now*

#40
Something terrible will happen to Io-san!
*literal translation*

#43
In the process of many delusions
*I like this alt way more*

#45
She took the bait!
*best translation. Using an English idiom with the same meaning and context*

#46
In front of the entrance

#56
I think the damage increased instead.
*literal*

#59
We're still standing...
*yeah, yeah yeah~. But yeah, original sentence is also fine*

#69
If you blow on your hands, they become a bit warmer, you know.
*english fix. I notice the term blowing on being more often used than the correct breathing out or exhaling*

#70
That's just for soothing it a bit, isn't it.
*edit the sentence in this context*

#77
Tsumiki-san will die!
*shindeshimau*

#78
Playing in the snow
*you get it by now*

#84
I've been put back?!
*tense fix*

#90
How big is she going to make it?
*lit*

#91
Wait...
*one syllable should not become 2 words*

#95
She has been squished!
*shikarete imasu => "she is [in the state of being] spread out"

#96
Snowman, finished...?

#97
By the way, how will you put the snowman's head on it?
*better translation in context and grammar*

#101
How the...
*OT also correct, but he's saying "dondake" which usually implies something like "How the hell can she [x]"*

#103
Snowball Fight

#106
Let's have a snowball fight!
--

#107
I've never heard of it before.
--

#109
Whether friend or foe, if one is hit, that person's out.
*edit*

#110
The person who hits his/her ally is also out.

#111
Also, it's forbidden to put stones inside your snowball.

#114
If so, Hime should join our team, I guess...
*personal edit*

#117
Because choosing their team is the same as choosing the chaotic route.
#118
Chaotic
*adjust to the context*

#126
Give some to me before we start.
--

#128
I'm not going to comment about why Mayoi is carrying chopsticks with her, but...
--

#129
What is he going to do with them?

#131
Knowing you, you must have prepared these for something bad.

#133
You're going to put those chopsticks inside the snowballs and...

#136
Why am I being used in your imagination!?

#138
Welcome to the Yukidama System. {yukidama=snowball

#141 
It's my Deluxe Automatic Snowball Generator Bazooka, and....
#142
Mayoi's Deluxe Automatic Snowball Generator Bazooka. Produced By Mayoi Hakase. YKDM System-001

#143 
The Automatic Snowball Supplementation Machine!
#144
Same creator's Automatic Snowball Supplementation Machine. Producted By Mayoi Hakase. YKDM System-002

#148
Please release {the} safety lock.

#150
Why in Hiroshima-dialect?
*lit*

#157
2. The person who hits his/her ally is also out.

#158
3. Tampering with the snowball is not allowed 
{people don't understand NG, and underline the part of the line saying "only shoot out"}

#160
Most likely.

#166
Commencing counterattack.

#169
*didn't understand the original TL, thought of this instead*
Countering with those chopsticks?!

#173
Seems we'll have to settle this once again.

#175
Ah!

#176
Ah.
*or less exclamation marks*

#181
It would just be a one-sided battle anyway...
--

#184
Finishing blow.
--

#186
It's cold, so I'm going home now.
--

#187
Why don't we eat something warm at the convenience store?
*typo fix*

#195
*I suggest the editor changes these lines*

#198
Io is good at cooking, after all.
* ~da shi*

#209
*pretty understandable sign, don't think it has to be TL'd. It's like, GRRR IO IS FLIRTING WITH CUTE GIRLS D:*

#210
Tsumiki-san, you actually wanted to be grouped together with Io, right?
--

#221
So I'm sure Io-san will say such a thing to you.
*needs edit, only added "So" because the ~kara was left untranslated in the previous sentence*

#222
By the way, Hime-chan and Mayoi-san, how are your cooking skills?
*plural*

#228
I can't even... crack eggs...properly...
*do write the full sentence*

#231
You're putting in too much strength.
--

#241
They say that when you're crying when cutting onions,
#242
it's more because your nose got stimulated by the onions rather than your eyes.
#243
That's probably why they say it's better if you cover your nose.
*small grammar fixes*

#245
(There's a sign saying breadcrumbs)

#249
It works against eyes as well!
*mo*

#251
*simply:*
Don't go too far! {or Don't overdo yourself!}

#259
Even you would be happy yourself if you got to eat woman's handmade cooking, right?
--

#271
Miyama-san, I'm going to do a flambe, so could you bring me the wine?
*add the accent aigu there*

#272
*no problem, it's what kana says...*
Ah, you're going to do that {\i1}woosh{\i0} thingy, right?
*no need to state "you mean" when you write "thingy"*

#273
Red or white wine?
*aka shiro, docchi?*

#274
Red wine.

(the kanji on the bottle says "For cooking {purposes}")

#275
I wonder why do they need to do a flambe in the first place?

#279
Smelly things should just be burned, right?
*that's OK*

#287
*I'd put "Kyouya, burn." here.*

#288
*and put "Kyouya, cute." here to finish the pun.*

#306 #307
*the timings are screwed up* the translations are correct, only need editor*
that when a pitcher with hot and burning spirit...
throws the hamburger in order to draw out the air...

#311
it might end up being {\i1}burned nicely{\i0}!
*edit*

#313
In that case, it would've exploded before it had reached the mitt, you know.

#315
Are you guys about to finish?
*tachi implying the group*

#316
In the middle of the finishing touch.
--

#317
If you already know that much, let it be!
*using an idiom with same context here*

#350
Since our group cracked too many eggs, I was also in charge of making some egg dishes!

#353
Blubber

#381
What is it?

#380
Making it clear for the editor:
Tsumiki tries to say oyome (bride), while mayoi adds samba...Oyomesamba is a band, changing the interpretation. changing it from bri to bridge is nice.

#396
Do you want to try ours as well?
*I bet the QC is going to change this to taste-testing or something xD Nah, j/k*

#420
[Thanks for the meal.]
*too lib translation*

#the scrolling text at the end
So, about the next episode of Acchi Kocchi...The first indoor "Kick the Can" tournament! 
Sakamori, Miyama and Kyouya are participating as well, I expect total chaos to occur.
The two groups, the runners and the demons, aim for meal and wish tickets!! {lib here}
And last but not least! Don't forget our explosive talks at our Worry Consultation corner, done by Io and I, Inui Sakaki.  (edit)
Next episode "I want to get caught <==> The Donna Donna of Love" 
3, 2, 1, engage!